Black Poetry : Dreams

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  1. chauntrice

    chauntrice New Member MEMBER

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    heres another one yalll

    Dreams

    They'll take you high
    above societies lies.
    Make you believe you can rise
    over the judgement and despise.
    Get past it all with just a simple disguise.
    so it seems.......
    When I have Dreams
    I forget that all things
    are not perfect,
    that people can be mean,
    and rip my heart at the seams.
    But Dreams
    leave me open,wishing, and hoping
    that one day you'll see.
    The only way to be free
    is to open your wings and soar
    clear to another world.
    But be aware
    make sure
    you leave here all doubts and tears
    and things that will scare
    or your dreams will deflate into
    nightmares
     
  2. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dreams can take somewhere
    special
    I loved yr flow on this
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True True
    Dreams but you in that comfort zone
    Another world type feeling
    Beautiful Poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    welcome to the house of love flow on look to read more of you soon !
     
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