Black Poetry : Dreams So Real

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dreams So Real


    I lie awake in dreams so real,
    I hear the sound the night wind plays.
    The stars therein you can grasp and feel
    and the skies echo forth your name.

    As I lay adrift in dreams so real,
    I hear the whispers from your eyes.
    Soft music, wine, candle light, and your heart
    reveals you as a kings crowning prize.

    As I awaken aloft from dreams so real,
    astonished by things you've done with me.
    The way my dreams make me feel
    I wonder are you as good in reality?



    Nah'shon-Rae 10/90
     
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    So real, surreal...dreams that is. Very nice!
     
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    reality can never match up to the best dreams
    cause reality is never what it seems...

    this is a tight scribe...precise and to the point
    keep flowin my brah
    peace
    khasm
     
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    so real....wonderful
     
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    indeed da dream of reality captured in da blissful moment
    of gentle sleep .....love is good as it get ....Tyteeeeeeeeeeeee!!
     
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    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think I'm dreaming right now...because reality sometimes isn't enough
     
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