Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dreams (for Penny Brunswick)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jun 23, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’ve seen you before
    Black woman
    Beautiful
    Strong
    Clean
    Standing naked behind the mist of my dreams
    Never leave me
    I need you Black woman
    If only in my dream

    I need the mysteries of your soul
    Mysteries that will challenge me
    Moving me outside myself
    Engaging me with your center
    Making me worthy
    Oh to touch you Black woman
    If only in my dream

    I have lost my mind
    I have lost everything
    To you
    To this love
    To this time
    To this dream
    They shall not be found
    Black woman
    I love you

    BE
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Yes!! Yes!!!!! Yes!!!

    i love this poem!

    poeticd
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel

    the passion of your bare soul, BE. It is beyond beauty to be loved so well.

    awesome
    a
     
  4. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you leave no doubt

    about it here, BE. This is, by far, a masterpiece!

    thank you for sharing your love this way.


    T
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man not a stone unturned
    awesome drop BE............
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh so sweet. flow on poet.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poets are out today
    Making the ladies stay
    Nice drop poet
     
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