Black Poetry : DREAMS COME TRUE

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ive held roses in the palm of my hand
    Fresh like the love thats embedded in my heart
    Although rose pedals grow old
    My love revives itself...NEW..like from the start
    Ive watched tides on a tranquil sea ebb slowly out of mind
    Ive witnessed the beautiful sun set unto a distand memory
    over a matter of time
    Only one things seems to never change and thats you
    Countless times pondering situations with the solution only to be you
    I can relate to many things that have come and gone
    Time tested my love for you still grows strong
    There's not a day that goes by that IM not reminded who holds my heart
    In the palm of her hand!
    When there should be beats, there's only her voice, reminding me NOONE
    can love me like she can!
    Even when there rainy days your the bang that should have been the thunder
    When a brotha bumps his head
    Your the AAH the makes me wonder!
    Wonder what would be, if I didnt have you
    You remind all the time that DREAMS DO COME TRUE


    BY Lj
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweet and warm speakin from the heart
    i likes
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One thing you can't hide from...and that's the heart. nice piece.
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks thnks,
     
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    wonderful scribe poet
    flow on ..
    feeling your drops
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Dang one!
    You"re talent
    is unlimited!
    Keep it comming! :jumping: :jumping:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FLOW HEAD POET OF THE WEEK
    TYTEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This just held a vision of beauty, this was just plain pretty, poet, geez.
     
  9. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is one big phat awwww!

    flow on, Poet of the Week
     
  10. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug: THNKS EVERYONE FOR THE READ :grouphug:
     
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