Black Poetry : DREAMS by SHO LOVE da POETIC

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  1. SOULDEEP3

    SOULDEEP3 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My brotha just came home with success on his brain~finally he realized life is subject to change~began attending school again~and working also~couldn't F*#K with hooligans he knew were too thirsty for troube still~but he said F#*K destruction,the God is gonna build~obtain a house & family & I'm'a gonna chill~THAT I feel,now he's on legitimate levels~brand new deal,no longer intimate with the devil~striving to live what most of us consider comfortably~struggle free? just about~his bank account?a hundred geez~owning a Black business~was his exact vision~& stacking riches was his plans to counterattack prison~mission accomplished~without any nonsense~he did what he had to do,& moved out the projects~his former crew was on some nonsense~what's the science Black?couldn't wait to hit'umwith the SURPRISE ATTACK?so here we go again with one the most deadliest sins~against our Ebony kin~known as the jealousy trend~and it ain't even matter~that he came back into the~ghetto every now & then~to show it ain't about the ends~spending maaad doe throughout his community~it's sad how some folks actually doubted his unity~the cruelest scheme~by his used to be team~led to gunshots,bleeding & my man's ruined dreams.

    Copyright(c)2001

    IF IT AIN'T WHITE IT AIN'T RIGHT? NONSENSE!!! IF IT AIN'T BLACK,IT AIN'T A FACT.
     
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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & peace & bond
    this was very nice flow and well pose'd

    we try not to use too much profanity here and ask that
    u see our ban word list and not try to get around these words
    that's astric out .....see our forum rule
    also i ask that you change your signature of profanity use
    happy you here to share and flow :) welcome within
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    NO PROBLEMO.....NO MORE PROFANITY.




    HOW CAN BLACKPEOPLE NOT BE GOD & GODDESSES WHEN WE WERE CREATED WITHIN THE
    IMAGE OF THE MOST HIGH? GODLINESS IS OUR BIRTHRIGHT.
    By ***SHALOM*** of The Conscious Collective***
     
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    what a sad story...nevertheless it holds true in many cases. i loved this poem and especially liked the way it was written. much love
     
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    thank u so much we are very greatful for your support
    and kindness you are very gifted and talented
    can you take the profanity out the signature under the bottom
    where your name is ......
    and please continue ya flow and share the wisdom u pose here
     
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    SOULDEEP3 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****Being Born Black is Beyond a Blessing***.


    SOULTOUCHAS~R~US


    SHALOM *OF THE ORIGINAL *CONSCIOUS COLLECTIVE*
     
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    THANK U, TRUE LOVE....THE COMPLIMENT IS GREATLY APPRECIATED{SMILE}.
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaaaay SOULDEEP3 :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Thanks for joining us and sharing this flow ... very nice ... we've got voice chat and i'd love to hear you speak this peace on the mic ... if you're not too shy :) ... make yourself at home, because you are.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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  9. SOULDEEP3

    SOULDEEP3 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    voice chat? Hmmm....sometime in the near future,if it'll work on this PC,I'll be more than glad to recite.
     
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