Black Poetry : Dreams and Shadows

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  1. Sun Ship

    Sun Ship Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I danced with the morning
    And with the fear of never seeing you again,
    Or the dreams

    Dreams that are like the shadows of hope
    That follow sun-drenched people
    Who dip their hands in the darkness of star filled skies

    I imagined what we should be
    For I believe god will rescue my faith before it fails
    And harvest your love before I leave what I believe in

    When I look for you between your breasts
    I fear my love is like a stain that cannot blend

    When I ponder what’s between your thighs
    I fear I will root myself to your soul

    When I seek my needs in you eyes
    I feel I’m on the edge of a dream
    Reaching to the other side of my life

    Where I am free

    Sun Ship © 2003
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    again welcome to the family of love & peace
    this was very nice love how it was done
     
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    welcome to da spot
    of continual flows...
    please let ya flows continue
    this was on point...
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "For I believe god will rescue my faith before it fails
    And harvest your love before I leave what I believe in"
    Love this
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah yeah..,tight piece man....welcome to tha fam....
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was really deep and nice. keep it flowin'.
     
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    heyyyyy sun ship...
    dis was lovely :)
    welcome and keep dis flow comin ;)
     
  8. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    Sunship, this was very nice and deep, keep bringing it
     
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    Sunship, this was very nice and deep, keep bringing it
     
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