Quiet Poetry Lounge : dreams and shadows

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sun Ship, Sep 3, 2003.

  1. Sun Ship

    Sun Ship Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I danced with the morning
    And with the fear of never seeing you again,
    Or the dreams

    Dreams that are like the shadows of hope
    That follow sun-drenched people
    Who dip their hands in the darkness of star filled skies

    I imagined what we should be
    For I believe god will rescue my faith before it fails
    And harvest your love before I leave what I believe in

    When I look for you between your breasts
    I fear my love is like a stain that cannot blend

    When I ponder what’s between your thighs
    I fear I will root myself to your soul

    When I seek my needs in you eyes
    I feel I’m on the edge of a dream
    Reaching to the other side of my life

    Where I am free

    Sun Ship © 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome sun ship .......to destee.com quiet flowz
    welcome to the family of hope and love
    this was very nicely pose'd as i bless dis vibe
    from above with love welcome !:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well done
     
  4. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave::wave::wave::wave::wave::wave::wave::wave::wave:
    WELCOME

    well said
     
  5. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for sharing this (snaps)
    great wording and easy to read ..(I read it a few times..)
    expressive.. flow on.......
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful..
    i so likes this scribe
    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such an ease to this piece, nicely done.
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SunShip,

    I got a little chill. I loved this flow.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...

    I'm speechless...

    oh my...this was so incredible...
     
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