Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dreamming

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, May 18, 2003.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When u dream
    u see my face
    a love compassion
    to rule

    in ya dream
    let us kiss
    now sleep the
    crimson petal
    the lusty spring is seen
    in the vision of us
    together alone
    from the misty view
    ya dream feel real

    voice of my heart speaks
    ya mental pulls it in
    ya love take forth the
    embracement as u sleep
    a smile cover the pain
    inside ya unspoken dream
    u feel the comfort of my touch
    u hold in grasp & clutch me
    what seem warm become hot
    blinking , tossing as u turn
    u feel my love closer
    u sweat in a moist of some bliss

    but yet ya humble heart filled
    with tenderness
    u hear me one last tyme

    my Beloveth unto me rise up
    my love be forth of me
    feel the rapture of bliss
    the sweet & gentleness
    my fairy one come and fly away
    as u awaken u remember me
    i am the dream of thee
    i am the love compassionly
    i am the mind u hold
    when u sleep & roll
    i am the sweet music u hear
    i am the one who cast away
    ya fears
    the silent embrace to caress
    ya face of tears
    awaken to my beckon of love
    see only me whom sit above
    and remember my heart

    as day break at dusk
    a soft moan ummmmmm!
    the beauty of the balls of ya eyez
    open like the mayflower blooming
    slowly i fade away
    in ya mind u feel and know i'm near
    u think of me all day
    until tonight i await ya sleep
    and when u dream i will be
    just remember u can't shake me
    i am their alwayz

    whatch how u dream!!!:)
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Day dreaming and I'm thinking of you-

    As sung by The Queen of Soul
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up ! 1poet ..............thankz bruh!
     
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    A true expression of a......Sweet Dream!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes a dream of pure love
    so sweet and true one sleep
    with it ...........Thankz
     
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    thats a beautiful dream...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes dreaming of the love
    the heart hold so dear
     
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    beautiful! beautiful! loved it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u purple
    as i so loveth u
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful piece RICH I wuv this as I wuv all of your work. :) keep up da flowin peace and blessins