Black Poetry : DREAMING

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every morning when im awake,
    I think about you constantly,
    It’s so amazing how we met and all of a sudden, we grow feelings for each other,
    I never felt this way before and there is no other way that I can express my feelings about you,
    I sense a strong and communal connection between the two of us,
    How you make me smile just keeps me blushing,
    The way my heart beats per second, and how my blood is rapidly thrusting,
    How my body grows cool chills down my neck and spine, I’ve never felt so good inside,
    Just has me yearning for you,
    So I want to be upfront and truthful,
    I think im falling in love with you,
    I almost cried when you said I was beautiful,
    I never had a man that cared so much about me,
    Even though we’re not that far way, I find myself dreaming,
    I want to be more than your lady, who’s skin is soft as silk, and who’s smile is as bright as the morning sun,
    I want to be closer to you and never let you go,
    When you come home I’ll be there to hold you,
    To hug you and kiss you, and to tell you that I love you,
    One day I would like to marry you and walk down that aisle,
    Honeymoon in the Caribbean while making love under the moonlight,
    Everything you want me to be, your wife and your soul mate,
    Starting a new life with a new family, just you and me,
    You mean so much to me, and because I care,
    We are meant to be together, and I hope you feel the same way,
    I’ve thought about this for too long, and now im ready to make that commitment.

    Aaliyahmonet:smokin:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey my sista i once remember them type of feelings. nice write my sista. keep on flowing my sista!
     
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    i feel ya sis......keep expressing them warm feelings u have for and about him.
     
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    This flowed like a ray of sunshine. Like nevar, I can remember feeling this way too. This brought a smile to my face.
     
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