Black Poetry : Dreaming

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ki-ki2004, Mar 15, 2004.

  1. ki-ki2004

    ki-ki2004 Active Member MEMBER

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    To be touched
    Not just by anyone,
    By You.

    To feel wanted
    Not just by anyone,
    By You.

    To be needed
    Not just by anyone,
    By You.

    To feel content
    Not just by anyone,
    By You.

    Do you want to touch me?
    Do you want me?
    Do you need me?
    Do you want to fulfill me?

    ---No Answer---

    Guess I'm dreaming...
    Somebody better wake me up!
    Put some strong black coffee in my tea cup.
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my...I did enjoy this one...
    love the concept...
    Very nice!...I'm feeling it, deep!
    Scribe on Poet!...Scribe on!
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe
    i do agree
    flow on
    feeling your vibe
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovely flowin ya pen is stroking nicely
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    likes
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. Just_Me

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    nice, I like it
     
  7. ki-ki2004

    ki-ki2004 Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for ALL the support my people! Man, I am loving this! <lol> Thank you, Thank you.
     
  8. twision

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    Very honest piece!
    I imagine everyone has felt this way one time or another
    You posed it so well
    Me personally, I'm glad you did
    Very nice

    Peace and love
     
  9. MADDRAPPER

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    that was nice keep on dropping but let me say this right here

    Clutch plans and touch pans see if they’re hot ouch!
    That burn even a slouch learn how to write lie on couch
    Thinking I’m a dumb fella with an umbrella and a pouch
    Like water in a dock I falter a lot got to alter my plot
    Write rhymes don’t excite minds, fight to align my hot
    Wheels on paper feels the vapor of neglect tuff wow!
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I agree with twision, I think we've all visited this place before. I liked this flow.
     
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