Black Poetry : Dreaming

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inhaling pure ecstasy
    Exhaling my soul
    Deeper and Deeper
    I fall into your control
    A slave to your touch
    Your caress
    Your intentions
    Cloud nine, ten, and eleven
    Your kiss
    Sweet and subtle
    All over my body
    You touch is untouchable
    Fingertips
    Linger my lips
    Mouth open
    Moaning
    Eyes rolling
    Slowly closing
    Biting my lip
    Trying to fight it
    Then I just let go
    As you work it slow
    Hands clenching the sheets
    Scratching your back
    Surrendering to the heat
    Leg shaking
    A wave of pleasure
    Want it to come fast
    But I want it to treasure
    Asking me if you laid it
    Normally I wouldn’t say ****
    But ****… I’ve got so say it
    Yes…
    You…are… theeee…
    Best…
    Lifts my leg up
    Goes deeper
    Sits on that spot
    Oh My God!
    My only thought
    Whispers in my ear
    Don’t stop
    Nibbles it
    ****, it’s too hot
    And then…
    ....
    I wake up
     
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    This poem is so on fire. Wow, so full of passion, Great write.
     
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    Too bad it was all just a dream! IT'S HOT!
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know right, only in my dreams... but thank you for reading and replying.
     
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    the flames burn hot. maybe you should roll over...or something.:)

    the river flows.
     
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    **** girl!!! this is hot............you described me and my man...lol
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lmao, well i guess i do see things from every perspective.
     
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    "Wow" now thats some kind of dream (smile)
    I feel ya on this one great write poetic sis.....

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK U FOR READING AND REPLYING AQUEENPASSING
     
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