Black Poetry : Dreaming M~Eye Reality (for blakverb)

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling worn and
    drawn out I...
    find myself in a state of
    intense emotionalism

    lying down to rest with
    pillow pressed against my breast

    Musiqsoulchild got me wishin
    you were the boy next door

    F
    A
    L
    L
    E
    N
    into a dreamstate
    Eye see
    'blak' stars

    One special star
    Illuminated
    dark space
    in my heart

    Smart this...
    'blak' star

    giving light
    ~~lighting
    the path to

    Truth
    Knowledge
    Love
    Spirituality
    and the
    Culture/POWER of OUR PEOPLE

    Eye Dream~
    ~~dreaming of the time in
    This Life where I
    Reach and Touch this
    'blak' star

    Eye Dream...
    hoping this
    Celestial moment will
    forever last

    Eye...

    wake from

    M~Eye Dream...
    with a throbbing head
    and I see a

    Halo' of stars

    StArGaZeD...

    I...notice a
    UnIqUe star
    that truly
    IlLuMiNaTeD
    my heart...
    CiRcUmPhErEnCeD M~Eye SpHeRe

    and

    succeded at

    ShOoTiNg stars
    into my heart

    IlLuMiNaTiNg
    my Soul.


    M~Eye 'blak' star...
    When my heart is dark and
    h
    ...e
    .....a
    ....... v
    ......... y

    I'll look to the stars
    for YOU to IlLuMiNaTe ME!!!

    For your scribes will be missed!
    :heart: Aminata

    May the Lord bless you and keep you lifted.
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just showin some :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen, You know I appreciate this write? If not, I do times the flow of the Nile. I've told you before that your skills have evolved into something to behold...and now I am thorughly convinced. To see you progress over the last few months have been incredible.

    one love,blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very tyte and well done upon a brutha so worthy
     
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    Wow
    Jaw has dropped from another piece
    This is too hoot for words
    I love this poet
     
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    a truly creative and well worked on piece.... to get it all so right and so tyte no air flowing through it and a pleasure to fall into it................. I hope i see more of you work walking thorugh my mind

    Peace
    Patrice
     
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    Such a beautiful ode to a sensational poet.
     
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