Poetry Critiques : DREAMER?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Orisons, Nov 5, 2008.

  1. Orisons

    Orisons Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DREAMER?

    Bewildered Monetary giants weeping dejectedly alone,
    As Worldwide the fully-grown decree the end of insane
    Shallow aspirations; to absolutely rule or totally own;
    Humanely compassionate charity, the era’s new reality.

    GROWTH, and we must grow in intellect not just ego,
    Utilising more of our Brain’s real power to create,
    Stop the DESECRATION/PILLAGING, our actions to date.
    It’s far easier to be king with relaxed flexible minds,
    Encouraging amiably strange peaceful behaviour to rage.

    Yes we can all be FREE, live in Peace and Harmony,
    NATIONAL/RACIAL DISCRIMINATION, STARVATION and WARS
    At last CRUSHED, destroyed, things of the stupid past.
    Material gain restrained as HUMANITY eases its pain,
    Wealth redefined, relative to achievements of the mind.


    Anyone who genuinely believes they are not programmed
    is graphically illustrating that their programming is COMPLETE!

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well expressed we all are program to be and do until the system let go .
    this went down smooth...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The programming runs deep, what has the most staying power, wealth of mind, or money in your pocket? Well done.
     
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    I was hoping you return to bless us with more of your artistic flowz and mental stormers
     
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