Black Poetry : Dream

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my love for you runs deeper than the ocean or sea.

    the love between you and me,

    a fine chemistry.

    this love brings no misery,

    and no tears to cry at night cause i know you`re gonna love me right.

    and this bond that has been created is so tight.

    there`s no more darkness in my life because you became my light.

    and on a long and dreadful night

    as long as i have you in my sight

    i know everything will be alright.

    i can see it now,

    no more rainy clouds.

    this is too good to be true.

    this mirage i see is so cruel.

    if only i could see you

    in front of me.

    when will my new you

    become a reality?

    AM :hiya:
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sis.. i like this ....


    its just beautifull from tha heart.. :couple:







    where have you been sis.. :hammer:





    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When love calls...answer. this is a tight piece and I enjoyed reading.
     
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    Claim that dream "Sista-mean"!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    very tight scribe i enjoyed the read.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a beautiful love from heart ...tyte drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hopefully that dream is in the process of becoming reality as we speak. Nice to read you again.
     
  8. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    XOXOXO

    I've been out of commission for awhile, helping to take care of someone close to me who has been diagnosed with Lupus. Right now, i'm lookin out for him. But on the good side, he's getting alot of support. I'm happy to be back, and hopefully I can get the chance to write more often.

    1 luv,
    AM :grin:
     
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