Black Poetry : Dream Reality (an UbZoRbShUn & Bishop Original)

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  1. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night I
    Dreamed of you
    Silky pillows
    Satiny blu
    You didn't belong
    To me
    Nor I to you
    Last night I dreamed in
    Reverse we were one
    Another's first
    Not only were we lovers
    We dreamed in Technicolors
    Last night when I dreamed
    Of you...
    You fed me honey-dipped dew
    You fed from me and I from you
    Glorious, spectacular music we made
    Sitting lazy carefree in the
    Garden shade
    On and on it went
    The two of us content
    All this happened last night
    When I dreamed of you

    UbZoRbShUn



    Last night you dreamt of me
    Making love to you under the sheets
    Bound to others
    Yet we have become secret lovers
    Feeding each other’s passion
    With sexual fruit
    Quenching lustful thirst
    With extasy juices
    Exchanging our essences with each other
    Uniting our bodies and souls to become one
    When you dreamt of us
    You experienced pleasure beyond belief
    A fire that cannot be quenched
    An appetite that cannot be satisfied
    Unending lovemaking
    Even when we are apart
    The memory of the dream serves to give you orgasmic pleasure throughout the day
    Yes that’s the dream that you had last night
    Except.....it wasn’t a dream

    Bishop
     
  2. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WAS IT A DREAM OR REALITY???

    I gots to know!!!! Now I got to keep my eyes on you two...But I ain't mad at ya!!!! I'm going to go to sleep and see what kind of things I can dream up.
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ZORBSHUN & BISHOP.....

    you two work so well together!! :)

    i thoroughly enjoyed the read!!

    Peace&Love...
    Sunny~
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well done poet's!!!

    one love,blak
     
  5. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    Delightful expressions!!

    keep scribes flowin'

    jah
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wellll I promised not to ...

    kiss and tell. I'm glad you all enjoyed this piece. I love collabs. Love reading em and writing em. Dream Reality is that "MATRIX" thang. Have you eva did something so clear that you swore it was real???? But like Morpheus said "what is real"???? Real is Dream Reality. So vivid that you can't say you weren't there but so unlikely to happen you can't say you were. Or were you....



    One
     
  7. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow!!! i can't say nothing but i loved it
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you did honey. thanks for the read
     
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    Zorb and Bish,

    Nice collab effort here!!! Enjoyed!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent!!!!

    *insatiable*
    give me more!!!:)
     
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