Quiet Poetry Lounge : dream of perfect vision

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In a dream a perfect vision I
    Was taken a walk in a garden
    of love and sweet grace
    Birds singin butterflies
    Flyin a rainbow shine
    No clouds just a vision of sight
    a stride in my walk as
    I cross a bridge
    The sun set
    And the moon started to shine
    alone and was not afraid
    a dream…..of magnificent perfection
    calm my soul and eased my mind
    see in this dream i…
    reunited with my mother
    as she holds my hand
    we walk around sweet grace
    where the flowers bloom
    all year long… the land I walk
    grass so green..a sweet melody
    reach my soul a tear ran down
    for it was only a dream
    children runnin and playin
    spirits free
    let me take my time
    I seen her face as she spoke to me
    We laughed and talk
    as a song came in my soul
    for I knew it was a dream
    but for that moment in that dream
    I was with my mother….in the garden
    of love and sweet grace


    a blkangel thang
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet scribe
    da vision of lovin
    is warm heartfelt
    it floats on air
    da looking eye see it
    tyte
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she was a big part of me..thanks for da read
     
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    what a...

    ...beautiful, soulful, piece of work, this. your voice is clear and your language goes straight to the heart...
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh thank you alter...cant wait to read ya again much love..:angel1:
     
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    A heavenly dream of things to come, Angel.
     
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