Black Poetry : Dream Lover

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My body has become numb to his touch,
    often I go to bed not expecting much.
    I turn on my side, closing my eyes and wonder why?
    To my surprise, the touch of his hand tracing my spine.
    I hear his whisper, it's tone reveals his desires, setting me on fire.
    My body squirms hungry for more. He doesn't ignore it's request, as he caresses, staring at me, licking his lips as if I was a three piece Kentucky Fried, breast, leg and thigh. I smile as I become arouse.
    He gently press his lips against mine, locking us in a passionate kiss.
    We indulge each others flavor as our bodies unite in vigorious love making. Igniting an explosion of orgasm(s), I collapse. Catching my breath, I turn to hold him, no one was there!!! My man was still downstairs watching the game.
    :jawdrop:

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAYUM, Coco...

    ...you got it bad, that way, babygurl? :)

    well, it bees like that sometimes...we get so caught up in our musings that fantasy becomes-like reality...and it feels so REAL at that moment. when it's over, we can't believe that it wasn't REAL.

    hmmm.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang...hot, hot, hot! :hot: :hot: :hot: keep on scribin', gurl...it's tyght! i know about that dreamin', myself!


    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
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    don't they say

    that most of the time we can't remember our dreams..
    I guess some are just tooo good to forget huh....

    K
     
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    i'm like half way through the poem..

    and suddenly your jaw drops :lol:


    poeticflowsinmotion~


    lovin' your work!


    pd :)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller, N'all, Babygirl got it dat good. :D

    Lister, Da kinda dream ya wanna fall back into and start where ya left off at.:D

    Kitana, Fo'sho!:)

    Poetic, :lol: thanks girlfriend:)


    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU GO GIRL

    THAT WAS REALLY REAL GOT A THRILL OUT OF THIS GIRL KEEP ON REPPING THIS HERE
     
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    Coco

    That was all flame mami! definitely on fire... sometimes you just wanna keep dreamin huh?

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!

    REALLY ON POINT
    IT'S LIK THAT WOW!!:eek:
     
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    CoCo. l


    umm... sis... you sure you ain't got no ghosts?? :lol:

    seriously tho... this was hot & just good to da
    last word!!

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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