Black Poetry : Dream Lover.

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  1. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm the kind-a brotha
    who comes out on days
    when the sun is up and flowers
    in parks are in bloom,
    dressed to kill in a blaze of glory,
    thoughts camaflauged behind
    tinted windows on wheels
    shined to the brilliane of a new nickl.

    But no one knows the story.

    I'm a walking talking encyclopedia,
    stacked upon a frame six foot four,
    what ever the topic, I know more.
    I woo the best because I am the best,
    and I could tell a few sad stories
    about thoses who looked to put
    me to the test.

    Yet.
    I'm a gentleman who aims to please.
    I'll open doors as if I was your
    personal doorman,
    bring you flowers in the dead of winter when Jack Frost is
    pounding furiously on doors and making
    windows opaque.

    But you'll never know me.

    I'd have all cylinders on full blast
    when your family and I met.
    They'd treat me like an old
    friend from the past and
    tell me things you couldn't know,
    even if you asked!
    They would bless you and I in
    the depths of their hearts out of a surety
    that we were meant to be,
    and your cousins and Uncles and Aunts
    would all ask the same question
    when we were gone:
    "How in the hell did she get invited
    to that dance?"

    But catch this:
    they'd never guess the half,
    of who I am, and all the things I can,
    and be totally ignorant of why I never
    show my hand;
    players out there would understand,
    I'll keep you on a natural high,
    serve you goose bumps for dinner
    and surround you with an aura
    so rarefied, your blood will become thinner
    with the altitude of my attitude.

    I offer late night showers with Barry in
    the background, personal manicures
    and pedicures and breakfast fixed
    in the wee hours before four
    on some far away Pacific shore
    like maybe..
    Tahiti.

    I'll pour hot oil by the drip
    from your heels to the back of your neck
    then massage from there to there, to THERE!!
    with a sensual trek...

    But I'll never let you in.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now tyte drop of dream lovering
    flow on now
     
  3. ille$t poete$$

    ille$t poete$$ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow my brutha...feelin dis one!
    Keep da flows comin :sand:
    hawla!
    tha ille$t
     
  4. angelicsage

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    Yeshujah…
    This was so phenomenally “dreamy” in its
    Depiction of the perfection sought from love
    And companionship…yet…so sad
    For the dream lover is the prize that
    The one who is “loved” will never win…
    Your flow truly drew me in…

    Excellent writing!
     
  5. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo RICH- 'ppreciate the read.

    iLLe$t-
    thanks for coming in on this- thanks I'll do what I can.

    angelicasage-
    you called it like I wrote it- thanks for looking.
     
  6. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YeshuJah - dear Brotha - good 2 see and read you!!!

    2fish
     
  7. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte tyte!!!! nice flow
     
  8. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    twofish-
    big ups! Long time nah see. Thanks for reading this.


    klabarron-
    thanks for peeping.

    JAH Love is ONE!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey now i likes this drop
    flow on.....
    :angel1:
     
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