Black Poetry : dream lover

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I am alone
    I think of u
    Standing here
    n my room…
    I look out the window…
    As the sun’s
    heat hits my face…
    I saw ur face
    Though da light of da sun…
    then it vanished
    Without a trace.
    .your on my mind…
    the wind blew my hair …
    for a split second…
    I thought it was you…
    My dream lover…..
    I close my eyes…
    So far away this man I think of…
    Is it true or just a daydream…
    My dream lover…
    Stands so tall…
    Strong in da heart…
    Bold in da soul..
    Yeah..this my dream lover…
    As I look out the window…
    Sun rays shine
    Down on me…
    An a trace of a second…
    I thought I felt you…
    But not a chance…
    For your only my
    Dream lover…
    When I am alone
    I think of u
    Caressin my soul
    Holding my being…
    I fall to your love…
    I look above….
    As my daydream passes by…
    :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love in a dream is sweet
    when one vision the moment
    and feel the touch of it in heart
    dreamlover
    is what we whole on to
    when the love not before u
    this had my mind thinking
    and seeing my dream lover

    very nice flow ...let the ink drop
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man--i ain't gonna even try to write a poem on this one because i'm feeling it, i'm glad i went back down the list to see and you know what--it's DEEP SO DEEP no words here just WOW!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My $$Richn$$...thanks for da read...
    :wave:
    that window i need to seal it up...
    i find comfort in dat window..
    just the vision of he...
    the touch of he...
    drives me in a daydream i cant
    release.....
    my daydream
    my dream lover...hmmmm one day...


    lilcherry76 well thanks for reading thats all dat count not the flow you place behind..just the love you show.... :wave:
     
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    mmmm
    loving this
    dreaming
    wow
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks glad you like da read... :shades:
     
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