Black Poetry : DREAM GARDEN of a POET's LOVE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da whole body

    in a translucent aspiration of vision

    my love upon da tri-color rainbow

    she like da bed of roses

    fragile in delicate beauty

    displaying air waves of many faces

    beheld in my plan view of supreme

    The perfume envelops my senses

    poundering da illusive rosery moments

    her heart open a flower so delightful

    full of compassionate rayz of love

    her body embed everything to my eyez

    her mind is a field of beauty showing

    multi-sprays of wisdom and knowledge


    She spread before my cushion of velvet

    covering a path in lavender blue violets

    she grows in profusion against da lilly pink

    while she covers da walk releasing her emulsion

    her essence like fine wine i sip

    as i step into da shade of light oak entwined

    I settle in a set of her hidden nest

    viewing cross da expansive fields of joy

    beside da water fall of cyrstalizing pour

    i see a reflection of morning morrows

    so sweet i taste da comfort of da fruits

    feeling the silken divine spirit of her touch

    as my eyez survey da horizon sunlit day

    Here is where i pen my poem

    from it's blueprint in flight of poetry echo's

    tap n' weave da bloom of her blosome

    verses n' lyrics born unto da mental i see

    in her song da many faces penetrating

    in my attention i paint each one in my memory

    I love this garden as a poet my very own dream.
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful, sentimenetal and sweet!

    My favorite lines:

    Her mind is a field of beauty showing


    and

    displaying air waves of many faces....



    oh, the many facets of the black woman!
     
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    Thank you dearly.... yes a black woman display many faces
    she is indeed love / pain / joy and sorrow / understanding
    yet venture depth and compassion she can be what you
    make her to be by how she is seen and treated ..............
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    are you sure that was a pen you were using?


    :SuN031::qqb023:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Well......maybe i quill it to canvas.....Thankz 4 da visit bruh !
     
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