Black Poetry : dream from beyond the eye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Jan 13, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tainted platinum"
    str8 from the soul
    its internal
    im still in another world


    Dream beyond the eye

    Young men and women

    We are the future
    Out in the streets
    There is no peace
    Young souls like us
    With no food to eat
    Children with no family
    And you come to battle me
    When we are the sun
    The moon the stars the limit
    For you and me
    Just believe
    In me
    And ill take your hand
    When u have no guidance
    Let my steps be yours
    We can fly
    When u can’t walk
    We can talk when u can’t hoar

    If u wanna know me
    Just talk to me when u dream
    I am your dreams
    When u got a vision
    When u speak
    I am the voice
    That defines greatness
    Just a taste
    Of me
    Is the best sensation known to men
    I am the cure to to the worlds plan
    I am the cancer amongst sickness
    But I am the vile
    T
    Hat
    We are life, together you and me
    I am the one who said you could succeed
    I am the healer when u bleed
    I am the joy
    That comes after the pain
    I am the light
    I am the grace
    I am you
    I am your face
    I am the pose4 that speaks of peace
    How do you see me
    Just close eyes and
    Fly with me
    I am love
    I am joy
    I am destiny
    I am the tears
    Crying
    Typing
    I am beyond
    What u understabnd
    I am not a man
    I am a spirit of hope
    What am I hope
    I am mercy
    To guide you
    I am your father
    When u have no one
    I am the loved one you lost
    She gone
    But I’m still here
    I’m still here for you
    I am the song
    U sing
    When u smile
    I am the song
    Yes
    Somebody believe
    Like I believe
    I got a dream
    Nobody believed in me
    I am the words
    When u can write no more
    I am the love
    I am the love
    Yeah
    Ohh. Oh.. oh. Oh..
    I am salvation
    I am …..
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I believe
    this is so nice
    Beyond the eye
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a really touching piece/peace
    j.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling u here tyte drop
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh I am so confused???????????

    Don't get mad at me and I hope I don't sound stupid...When I read
    I was all off into and expecting something different when I got to the
    end...I know you are a philosophical brother , and sometimes you write
    in Parabelic format...Are you talking about the Great "I AM"?
    Thanks for enlightening me, cause I know you will! LOL
    Don't want to over analyze or read the wrong thing into a beautiful scribe.
    But you know me...I like "CLARITY"....
    Blessings On Your House!
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like msluscious, I need 2 know, cuz I don't want 2 read wrong.
    Please enlighten.
     
  7. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am talking bout the great i am
    but this flow was spiritual
    like god would always be with u
    and u are a part of him
    u know
    at the time i wrote i was jamming a gospel track and the holy ghost did something to me
    i started with a purpose like a preacher then i got crunk at the end
    thanks for the response
    im glad someone would actually reply to me if they didn't get a poem or something
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice very nice
    posed well
    tight drop..Angel
     
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