Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dream Desires.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 1, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the mist of my dream
    I felt myself scream
    Tears flowing
    Heart ache
    Clouds came
    And I woke up
    Reaching out to you
    Yearning for your touch
    Your love just a kiss
    Maybe hold me
    Wishing for you tonight…
    In my slumber
    I feel your warmth
    As you gave me back a feeling
    I thought I lost..sometime ago
    Twisted in the sheets
    Holding on to my heart
    Taking my thoughts of you on high
    Just to be close to you tonight
    And nights to come…
    to see you in my mornings
    Laugh over coffee
    And share the shower
    Kiss and see you later for lunch
    Or just greet you when you walk in the door
    From a hard days work...
    Dinner on the table…
    And kids tucked away in slumber
    For the night just you and I
    I maybe crazy…
    But the love you give me
    Takes me beyond and over
    So tonight
    Take my hand
    Let me lead you to paradise
    Within our dreams…let me just once
    Take you beyond and over
    As you take me…
    In the mist of my dream
    I felt myself scream
    Tears flowing
    Heart ache
    Clouds came
    And I woke up
    Reaching out to you
    Longing for you
    Wishing for you
    As your love protects me
    In the mist of my dream


    (C) 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice what a dream & desires pose'd here......
    let ya pen flow on
     
  3. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this one was smooth... it can be so reliving and at the same time frustrating when you keep having dreams about the one you miss...
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    may the desires of your dreams come true..
    nice flow...
     
  5. kente417mojo

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    A beautiful dream. This poem was very nice and heartfelt. :luvv:
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a heartfelt dream posed onto paper.
     
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