Black Poetry : DREAM CASTLE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through my mind
    mirror image shine
    as i enter the castle
    of many dreams

    I find myself at da helm
    of ya beautiful reflection
    filling my desires of lasting
    compassion & satisfaction

    In da garden of memories
    spool in the anticipation
    experiencing passion
    i view you in my dreams
    of compromises

    As i peep into you closet of secrets
    i arrive inside your bedroom
    the castle of my heart open doors
    of loving and accomplishment
    drifting deeper into our future of love

    My curiosity overtaken by each
    invitation your body pose upon me
    the dream reality seen tenderly
    where i dewell come share the glories
    i cherish through ya eyes my dream
    castle love .:heart: :luv: :heart
    :

    A Dyamondluv Creation
    Nu-wave Dreamy Production
    2005 $R
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was just pefect it held me close wanting more as it ended...
    now ya know i want more of this....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Riding on a cloud bound
    to your castle of dreams
    Still floating on air as I arrive
    in your boudoir, or so it seems
    Adrift in the majesty of your aura
    Lingering in the magic of your kiss
    So drawn to you am I, enticed by
    the romantic dream state of this bliss
    As you see deep inside my eyes, so am I
    entranced by the toffee windows of your soul
    The future awaits us, as this mirror image
    reflects the beauty of our dream spirits, whole


    You painted a beautiful portrait with your words....
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you Angel , surely theirs more pt.2 next
    when you view the eyes so dreamy an ova flow
    of beauty compromise the warmth in da dream
    the castle become my reality space ...stay tune!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Watz.............
    Through the mist composed
    a journey dreamy and fine
    from the wells of dreams i see
    as the castle opens it's gate
    i now stand at the helm inside
    the bedroom of love that beackon
    me ........i so cometh in upon thee.
    Thankz a million ....wow!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Await me at the helm
    with arms open wide
    accepting an eternity of
    cuddly dreams by your side
    with an adoration of love
    that will fill your castle with pride

    You're quite welcome Rich...
     
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    Another great flow, Rich...I see u too, Watz, adding ya flavor to the mix...


    Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let not the awakening come
    i love it when my heart is song
    from the dream my castle theme
    and the warmth this vision bring
    cascaded on this mystical dream

    thankz bigdrizzle for the visit my brutha kin
    as i let the dream castle sing again pt.3 next !!!
     
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    Dreamy love i see outward from the castle of my heart
    i now lone to have and hold within my soul as i sleep
    yet awaken waiting for one's arrival
     
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    Hi Rich
    this was just so sweet and relaxing
    never wanting to awake from the dream
    So nice

    Peace
     
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