Black Poetry : DREAM CASTLE pt.III

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through new experiences
    we vent between love & hate
    find reasons to share as mates
    being together been our destiny's
    fate

    Gallopping beyond the distance
    of our mortal existance
    our bodies clash through the core
    as the castle door open dreamz
    of music

    Like a razor flashback i see deeper
    my beloveth as my hands now sweeper
    brisking ya face , tracing the dream
    i think of our passion , giving me hope

    Wearing a brilliant crown magnificately
    my love wove deeper on mystical rise
    desperately seaerching dreamz
    silently covering my heart , so fragile
    where i so loveth thee , now !
    i sit in my chambers of love wondering.



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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the warmth of the dream
    penetrates my soul
    emotions are brimming
    almost taking their toll
    let the dream burst forth
    spilling all of life's tales
    filled with the bitter and the sweet
    a true mixture of life that never fails
    such thoughts make me delve deep
    within my psyche, as I wonder....
     
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    Hi Rich
    yeah
    the castle of dreams
    the enchanted kingdom
    for a King & his Queen
    WOW! :)
    so niceee


    Peace
     
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    The trilogy of poetic personafied...There's no deny u, brotha Rich..Keep flowin'...


    Peace!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes watz as it go deep into thy soul
    and caress the thoughts as the dream
    clash from the castle of lovin...thankz

    indeed bluewater where thy hearts
    lay upon the walls of minds of two
    thy king and queen in the castle of love
    thankz a million for the warmth and visit

    bigdrizzle ....man thankz a million for the support
    as this maze of love from thy dream within da castle
    play out in rapaid fire ......
     
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    you just placed me deep inside of heaven
    i am enjoying this dream so much....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside the castle walls
    dreams flow love drift
    catching all through ya
    eyez ...thankz Angel
     
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    I'm ready for part IV. I just love reading your poetry. It is so inspiring.
     
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    thank you nml26 surely it's coming
    dream castle , your words means so much to me thankz again
     
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    Taking destiny in our hands
    Venting with love and hate
    But your still my mate
    No matter the rain
    Emotions take apart
    And I am your Angel
    Forever more….

    Every time I close my eyes
    I feel your warmth
    And know your heart
    As the castle doors open
    A dream was made for two
    It’s others then it’s me
    The passion of your call
    The essence within your heart
    As time goes
    I know the truth of you
    The depth of you is me
    And it will never change
    For hope gave us destiny
    Upon a magical ride
    I am taking it in stride
    You don’t have to sit and wonder
    For your dreams search is over
    Awww yes….your Angel eyes is here
     
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