Black Poetry : DREAM CASTLE (pt.II)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beloveth
    upon the millions of starz of glow
    and the moon intimate dance show
    as they blossom throughout da night
    our souls peek, speaking passion light
    spirits combine and unite

    Becoming one, minds blend
    of two hearts lovin now mend
    feeling beauty beyond secret sin
    all my effort , compassionate trend
    call , whispering , welcoming u in

    Imagining you beside my heart
    reminiscing off dreams afar
    as we dance under da star
    comfortable in warmth we are
    spreading a lovely fragrance glist

    Selecting one yellow rose brush
    in soft pink stroking ya face as
    my handz trace the maze of ya smile
    i place it in your translucent handz
    as i press my lips upon yours we partake
    in the dew-kiss of everlasting


    A Dyamondluv Creation
    Nu-wave Ink Dream Production
    2005 $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A kiss that tastes
    of love's pure wine
    intoxicating our souls
    with a love that's divine
    I drip into your body
    as you seep into mine
    like a waterfall of cascading
    raindrops and liquid star shine
    I've never seen a silver moon
    before, I guess it must be a sign
    telling us to dance under this mysterious
    moonlight while our two hearts entwine


    Your vision is quite enchanting....
     
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    two souls becoming one
    this took me way out...
    untouched but yet touched
    within the spirit...i am loving this
    and you know it!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    wonderful drop, I can get with that...sweet sounds, thanks for laying it out.
     
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    The sequel was jes as powerful as the 1st...Rich & Watz double-teaming another tread...Keep flowing, Yawl....

    Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watz...........
    Dreamz on siver line
    the warmth of love
    soft and divine in shine
    as the midnight hour arrive
    from the bedroom of suprise
    the castle doors open
    my body await for that feeling
    as i drift under ya skirt great
    passion flow from da candle light
    glow........................................

    Angel .....................................
    feeling my time of sight
    under the stars of radiant light
    as the dream is catching it's bliss
    and the harvest moon intimate twist
    the castle doors open wide
    as the love calling come inside
    thankz my heart on a ride ...............

    queentswana..................................
    thank u from my heart
    as this dream castle open and part
    from da sound of thy love
    come on up within and above
    so thank u for the visit and for feeling
    da dream of mines ........................

    bigdrizzle man pt.3 will be da encore
    as the castle of dreams score and more
    thankz bruh again for stepping in .........
     
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    Pt. 3 up enjoy !!
     
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    Hi Rich
    the passion wakes beneath the stars
    i'm just enjoyng this mellow ride

    Peace
     
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    Thank you sista bluewater
    relax and ride your words mean a lot to me.
     
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    yes your heart is on a ride of passion and romance and I am loving every vibe of it....
     
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