Black Poetry : Dream Baby

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  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet sweet baby standing there
    sunlight shining on your coal black hair
    mmm, that body made me blush
    talk about an adrenalin rush
    you made my body come alive
    tinglin' baby deep inside
    skin was crawlin' stars flew by
    all from lookin' in your eyes
    that lazy grin just for me
    made me melt, felt so dizzy
    those deep deep blue dancin' eyes
    released a thousand butterflies
    the first time I tasted your kiss
    was nectar baby, from your lips
    pure pleasure, what can I say
    it simply took, my breath away
    hands so urgent, touching me
    trailing fire all over my body
    taking my body, stealing my heart
    then you tore my world apart

    cruel cruel baby standing there
    sunlight shining on your coal black hair
    feeding your magic to another girl
    soon you're gonna' rock her world
    you still make me tremble, lose control
    but your m.o. baby, is gettin' old
    with practiced skill, you play the game
    to devour and conquer is your main aim
    takin' hearts and keepin' a tally
    infidelity baby, is right up your alley
    not staying faithful to any one girl
    you're no.1 in your own little world
    using your body like a weapon of war
    deflowering virgins and keepin' score
    through the land of love, you weave a path
    leaving a trail of broken hearts
    but one day baby you'll wake to find
    that one of those hearts you left behind
    was THE ONE, and was meant to be
    look into your dreams, maybe it's me

    (c) nfn 2001
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you

    and I completely dig your reason, your rhythm and your rhyme! Tell the story like it is, Poet! Yes indeed!

    thank you

    a
     
  3. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See,

    this is too real for me, sis. Do I know you? :laugh:

    this is **** straight!

    SWT
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a..thank you..this was inspired by a first love..and you know what they can do to a girl...

    shadee...glad you could connect...thanx for feelin it...those guys have a lot to answer for huh....

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ALL THE LOVE U SHO

    IS SO BEAUTIFUL ..........MAKES ME THINK BACK:heart: :toast:
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    what did i say earlier....

    girl you're simply a true professional


    pd


    excellent work!
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich..thank you..glad I could take you for a stroll down memory lane...

    pd..my thanx for your compliment..glad you enjoyed the read..

    K
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kitana, yes, you are right...lovin' the way this piece floats, dear poetess. keep on scribin', as i continue to watch.
     
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