Quiet Poetry Lounge : drawing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Sep 3, 2016.

  1. TotalView

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    in the darkest charcoal
    i sketch your voice
    on the canvas of my mind

    rub my smudged fingers
    across my parted lips
    then suckle the songs

    you compose with love:
    causing poems to well up inside me
    like tears that need to be cried
     
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    No woman, no cry.
    Carry on writing your beautiful poems.
     
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    Thank you, dear poet.
    I will try my level best to continue to write poems you deem beautiful.

    (smile)
     
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    Starship, precious.
    Thank you, James.

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