Black Poetry : DRAW NEAR ME

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Draw near me i hear u call
    feel the rhythm the breeze of thee
    draw near me to hear da words
    the thoughts i feel and da love
    my soul now spills draw near me
    through da grace
    to see da look upon thy face
    as i express and reveal
    that my love was truely real
    draw near me and feel my soul
    where our love is warm & blod
    come closer to hear me
    as i whisper free
    to say how i loveth thee
    your my fate da mate see
    we are what love should really be
    not the play thang of some three
    so i fired thee can nolong help me
    trying to find a new soul
    to be a sitter to my mold
    one to never invade my space
    and fool around in my place
    the game is cold , yes bold
    draw near me
    da past is gone still standing strong
    can't let go, won't move on
    inside ya love is my home
    forgive and forget to move along
    hear me feel my song
    dat we surely belong
    no need to crack or change da tone
    draw near me , near me , near me !
     
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    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt like I was right there in the islands!! Loved it!

    NapturallyYours
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you sista for feeling and placing thy warmth near me .
     
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    I have always been near
    Really haven’t gone anywhere
    My heart is so frail these days
    Still healing from some past ailments
    You were making it all ok
    But then that crazyness took place
    Got me doubting everything you say
    Feeln’ a little foolish too
    Cuz I trusted you
    No hard feelings towards you
    Just needed to know what’s the truth
    I’ve been so blue without you
    Uncertainty rolln’ around in my mind
    Really missn’ spending time with you
    But also need some answers
    to help me get through
    these mixed up emotions
    from your luv potion
    You know how I feel about you
    Just need a little time to work it out
    And cease my doubts
    Hope you can hear my fears
    And know that I’ve always been near
    TO YOU
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the uncertainties to the mind
    well heard ..........................
    thank you for listening and feelin me
    yet so far so few as the gap continues .
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    So sweet and blissful, nice flow Rich:)

    Much Love

    AM
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umm ummm ummm brother Rich you have done it again, speaking from the heart. You are truly talented!
     
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    thank u Aaliyahmonet u warms my heart

    thank u so much happy u like choclatangel
     
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    Come draw near me for da depth of my warmth
     
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    Wanting someone to draw near, wondering if they hear you for certainly, they should. Many can relate I'm sure. This was so well posed, and a good flowback from 4EverLuv.
     
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