Black Poetry : Drastic shifts in emotions

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving you is so divine



    Drastic shifts in emotions make me doubt

    No not how I feel about you.
    Certain instincts or feelings I have
    I question what it is all about
    I do question sometimes what I do
    When you ask me do I care for you

    I reply:nuts:
    I love you so:kiss1:

    Instead of getting frustrated
    I keep trying to make rational sense
    Don't you know

    Don't stop me, kick me around
    Have me go thru some Unnecessary things
    keep giving me
    I want you now
    the love the sweet you bring

    Enjoy the ride
    All aboard.. Come with me girl.
    The thoughts I have
    They offer me
    A chance to express myself

    Flows freely
    I am not trying to hide
    The emotions you give me
    The pleasures we make
    Never suppress
    Your love me or hide

    What I feel inside
    It seems I’m on a roller coaster ride
    Doing my best not to jump
    Off half way through the ride.
    We will be much safer
    If we stay seated until the end
    Do you wanna go?
     
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    yo man this was good

    ya know that's what i'm saying

    enjoy the ride like you say

    sit back and relax let me do my work

    :donttell:
     
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    the ups and downs...

    ...the bumps and bruises...and all the uses we go through, with each "how are you," that gives opportunities to tomorrow's smile...when thinking about today. YES...enjoy the ride.:)

    NICE.
     
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    FLASHBACKS OF A LOVE I ONCE KNEW. THIS WAS NICE HODEE, DO YA THANG .
     
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    whewwww......lay it on out there bruh ! feeling this
     
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    Hodee....

    nice piece, bruh.

    You keep it real...in life...and in love.

    Dapz.

    :toast:
     
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    the destination is usually always better than hitch hiking home

    enjoyd your drop
     
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    To be able to maintain our composure during that rollercoaster ride, despite all the lifts and dips...pondering this. Appreciated your expression Hodee.
     
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    heartfelt Hodee.....Nice!
     
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    Yo.. Money
    How are you Bro. What's up?
     
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