Quiet Poetry Lounge : Drastic Call

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, May 21, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drastic Call

    My brain stem wise just to emphasize the twinkle in eyes
    Sprinkle vibes on microphones, strong enough to wrinkle tribes
    And cause war, pronounce words my flow bounce absurd
    Like basketballs a drastic call for a lay up on these nerds
    In the paint teams try recruit me I can shoot the three
    Like Chris Paul this is all gravy neither tall or lazy you see?
    Want bling and championship rings like Robert Horry he
    Has a famous story to tell about the Lakers and the Spurs
    On shore again with hardcore trend got gravy like the navy
    Script floats like ship and boats wetness is driving me crazy
    On vessels see minds that are design to float on water like
    Ducks but stink clowns sink and drown like the Titanic hype
    Like Leonardo Dicaprio in nice words icebergs can strike
    Their skills, slaughter hate then alternate between hope
    And despair, coat my hair with grease and peace, that choke
    The wet sweat and make it flow clean like afro sheen when
    softly comb my costly dome try get some waves now and then
    at the bar thirst while my car in reverse waitress gave me
    a starburst to chew on, new song on the juke box felt so free
    clothes make the man so I got episodes and a great plan for chick
    in a skirt
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    do yo thang bruh and watch her footwork
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like you're a man with a plan, like the pace of this piece.
     
  4. PatriceCQueen

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    i like how you happily broke the rules about rhyming..... we ought always to break these rules once or more or even invent a new way of writing a poem

    Peace

    It was a a woderful read where i had to focus - NICE

    Patrice
     
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