Black Poetry : Dramatized No More

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ms_MochaB, Jan 7, 2003.

  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Teardrops dried on my face somber thoughts of past disgrace
    headaches swarm and my body aches 'cause I don't know what went wrong.

    Slow lonely walks down the street, around the block. back into the house. I walked out, jumped in the car and spent time with those that are not really hear but yet linger in my mind, but even then there was no you.

    I've cried too many tears ... I've walked too many blocks ... and I've driven too many miles to continue to worry about what is instore for us ....

    It's over now .... I'm no longer in denial
    WE are over .... I don't have a desire to see u anymore
    Don't call me ... because I know I won't be calling you

    Now I'm smiling ... happy to see life everyday, no more pain ... no more tears ... no more wondering why

    For once in my life I see ... that without you I can still be me

    I've relinquished my baggage .... I've dropped the fears ...

    I have opened my eyes .... I've declared no more obstacles in my way

    This day I proclaim that I will no longer be dramatized by everything about you that I have longed to forget

    I throw up my hands and I walk away ... knowing and believeing that today is my day ...
     
  2. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    creative piece, i like your style

    one luv
     
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    Teardrops dried on my face somber thoughts of past disgrace

    love how u started this off

    grat piece

    gotta give love to fellow hoosiers

    im from indianapolis
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now u understand
    da life of plain
    worry not
    feel no pain
    hold ya head up
    have no shame
    it's ova now
    let it be
    see da new dayz
    was set for thee
    now come to me !!
    let it be
    see da luv i stor in thee
    u can lean on me !

    nice vibe u scribe loved da flow .....
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaay Ms_MochaB :wave:

    So good to have you back in the house !!! :love:

    This peace feels like a rollercoaster ride ...
    one extreme to the next ... fast ... whew!

    Great Work :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you ...

    Thank you for your replies ... every word represented a tear cried dried up ... this is real to me ... I'm glad you felt me in this vibe ....

    Mind~Soul ... thank u very much

    lonely poet ... Indiana all the way, maybe we can get together sometime and just flow ... Kokomo is only 45 minutes away

    $$Rich$$ ... As always ... thank u ... thank u ...thank u, you know what to say right when I need it the most

    and last, but definitely not least ... Destee, I will never be gone too long this is a place I consider home and I thank u once again for allowing me to feel welcome in a place where my soulsih cries can be heard ... thanks sis and God Bless

    God bless u all ... Peace and Blessings
     
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