Khasm13 : drama cwueene

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    frustration over
    no longer the holder
    of a boulder
    maybe cause my mentality’s older
    maybe it’s the head on my shoulders

    who knows

    im glad you said it this time
    cause this time is mine
    no longer feeling shade
    blocked off from the sunshine
    i said it before
    but it just didn’t stick
    maybe it was the tears
    and the smeared lipstick
    or maybe I just wasn’t hardcore
    enough
    or maybe i just wasn’t in touch
    with my feelings
    and the daily dealings
    of you and me
    but to stick this out
    in the face of misery
    would just be plain cheesy
    under appreciation can really
    try a ni##as patience
    cause times a wastin(Badu)
    this relation
    is dried up like
    a raisin
    in the summer heat
    come on feet(Lord Quas)
    move for me
    cause i cant stand it here
    with these nobody’s
    looking at me
    like i’m stone crazy(beatnuts)
    yeah yeah you’re right
    i just like yelling
    in the wee hours of the night
    oh yeah and i liked
    you breaking down my door
    ready for a fight
    its time for this cat to take flight
    out of sight

    oh yeah,did i say
    i’m so glad you said it
    matter fact
    i cherish the day(Sade)
    no time to split hairs
    cause my hair dreaded
    find another payday
    baby…
    f#cked up that it had to be this way
    but hey what can you say
    maybe you’ll be on my level one day
    but i doubt it
    cause your vision clouded
    shrouded by your upbringing
    just don’t be ringing my bell
    or sending notes via e-mail
    cause messing around with you
    will have a n#gga in jail
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got you bro.............Keep flowin and leave that girl alone :shock:

    1 love, swt
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm really feelin' this...keep up the good work...
     
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    hey, i opened this and liked it...i know the experience...nice scribe.
     
  5. Khasm13

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    like roy ayers
    still searchin
    keep meetin
    chicken domes learchin
    pearchin
    on top of tall towers
    witherin my hearts flowers
    with superhuman powers
     
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    ok, ok....that sounds like drama, but the chaos was put together so well. Is that possible?
     
  7. Khasm13

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    order out of chaos
    is the way of all creation
    and as i took a step back
    from the situation
    i was granted the elation
    of clarity
    thats why
    this poem be
    put together
    so precisely

    lifes lessons learned
    sometimes you get burned
    sometimes the fires just get churned...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    order out of chaos
    is the way of all creation
    and as i took a step back
    from the situation
    i was granted the elation
    of clarity
    thats why
    this poem be
    put together
    so precisely


    understood!!!! well done!
     
  9. Khasm13

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    drama actin
    self pride subtractin
    composure jackin
    and self control lackin
    static backin
    erratic chops hackin
    cause you think i'm mackin
    that not even what happin
    cheek still red from the slappin
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Beutifully put
    I was eloquently shooked
    LOOOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!!!
     
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