Black Poetry : Dragon Jewels

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by river, Jul 23, 2005.

  1. river

    river Watch Her Flow MEMBER

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    One turns water to wine
    One turns a cuss word into a song
    That rolls off his tongue
    Like music you want to make love to

    One put a spell on my mind
    Monster rolling fire
    Off his tongue and his cheek
    Hot chocolate simmered against mine
    Dragon jewels by the soda fountain
    I am so scared of you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice drop sista river ................
     
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    peace Queen,

    with a mind like yours, I'm sure you would be an equal match for either force...........

    - a beautiful jewel -
     
  4. river

    river Watch Her Flow MEMBER

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    Peace to you God

    Not to compare to the eautiful jewel you let flow to my girl PoeticManifesta. It just made me squeal with glee to think of y'all. I've never before seen the poet or the lover in you but I know she'll be very happy.
     
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    So nice to read something new from you river. Words chocked full of strong imagery, just like I remember from you. Flow on.
     
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    deepy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good to see that creativity again...diggin you to river...
     
  7. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Two sides of the same coin...loved this peice !
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    short but i like it alot....i have this feeling i klnwo whut youre gettin at with this...very creative River...its good to see u around