Black Poetry : Down n' out

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Skin of colored hoodie home bound
    skittles , tea, my cell mound
    followed by hate my heart pound
    what is it have i done
    but be a young man in this town
    am i threat for being who i be
    O' my God look what happen to me
    Hear my cry out for help
    let my death be not under sweap
    victim of hate and racist act
    in this community wit such track
    my love for life now taken
    what did i do, who is hatin'
    last letter known as Z
    just now killed me ...see
    why is Z still free do i matter
    lord help me my plea !!
    as i look back i see so many in rage
    but sorry people da system have us cage
    self defense will continue be
    under da law of white supremacy
    was it a community watch
    or community hunt down n' out
    seen as da punk '
    zimmerman
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    1
    I will return through others.
    :mad:
     
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    MsVeraisblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You posted this on twitter. and i fell in love with it. Love it, Love it..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you from my heart sistah !
     
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    "I will return through others"

    Powerful!! Great ending.
     
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    Thank you my dearest from my heart this means so much to me ......
     
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