Black Poetry : Down By Law

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Oct 18, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Henceforth,

    Notwithstanding,

    You're the man ~

    Corrections,

    Ain't a place I wish to live

    The Great I Am

    Has a better plan...

    A telepathic cherub ridden land

    See ya', wouldn't wanna be ya, friends

    Light and dark unmatching bookends

    Segregated church and state

    Stange bedfellows make

    Nope, I'd rather be born again

    Irrepressible Jesus fans

    Yielding to the Son of Man

    Saved by the blood of Christ

    Who sacrificed his life

    Like the memo says

    You're the man...


    Darryl Abdu Omari :1on1:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop...yes indeed i feel ya
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up sho ya right on point here
    smooth flow
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'd like to thank both $$RICH$$, and Mzblkangel,

    But for the love you've shown.
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I still cram to understand how you write like that. In my opinion....Just mine! I swear I can read your work at different speeds and come up with a totally different meaning of what I read the first time. I just love you!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your opinion counts where 1 is concerned and I appreciate the love.
     
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