Black Poetry : Dough Jordan Vs Maddrapper

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DOUGH JORDAN VS MADDRAPPER

    Dissing MADDRAPPER one last time

    I beat u round one so this might just be it/
    if u ever had a good bar I'd like ta see it/
    wuz the first one ta diss u, been more than months/
    so wack DEJA VU don't wanna check u more than once/
    how u not get one vote last round? crossin ya speech/
    u got multis right? yea, u got MULTI losses this week/
    more than one since u stupid, my whole game tight/
    u dumb, u couldn't even spell ya own name right/
    mad got one D, get hurt bad, u the worst ***/
    u bottom, Dough stay on top like a shirt tag/
    dreamin ya top but no, u just schemin a lot/
    cuz ya verse randomly rhyme, don't mean that its hot/
    u were beyond shutout round one, a note to yaself.../
    that u got zero, and I woulda let u vote for yaself/
    tellin u what? run on raps, need ta stress commas after/
    if u are what u eat, then I guess I'ma rapper/

    Diss to DOUGH JORDAN #2

    Your work lacks hope as a jerk you whack in quote
    You leave out grammar so that squeeze the glamour and scope
    Of your lyrics, your dependency on my verse has a tendency
    To burst your mainframe and curse your name no serenity
    My long growing trend is like a strong blowing wind
    Became quite large while you fight and dodge this blend
    Highly recommend you seeing a doctor, shyly my friend
    You not being proper in your rhymes, actions illustrate
    Your Attractions are great to my post find satisfaction to hate
    And fake your emotions, I flow like lakes and oceans create
    Turbulence and pain with disturbance in your brain come
    Amazingly with fire and occasionally require a bum
    Like you to back off you’re whack and lost no class
    Your flow trash like sanitation, building up a cost fast
    Call city removal don’t need a shitty approval for this task
    I must restrain your behavior why try stain my flavor?
    I’m most sincere to say you post once a year problem is major
    Don’t understand your pride it’s strange, Man it span
    A wide range of wackiness, you read my posts so my plan
    In demand, look even after your curfew you pursue
    My verse and your crew thirst worse for my verbal stew
    So you accept me as whack because you don’t step back
    Constantly tasting my chili and wasting silly time, maniac
    The farm fresh post alarm, suggest most of my creations
    You’ve adored temptations can’t be ignored

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    break it on down and blow 'em awayyyyyyyyy!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ thanks for responding to this for real yo really appreciate that
     
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