Black Haiku : Doubt/Indecision

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Voice of Doubt-within
    Double-minded, confused
    Direction needed.

    One way another way
    Fork in the road and stuck
    guidance to get out.
     
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    criscross road mindful
    double thoughts looms confusion
    path of light ahead
     
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    Which way should I go
    Should I walk left or flow right
    Where is my life's map?
     
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    The path disturbed by wind
    Footsteps in sand brushed away
    Doubt and I best friends

    What should I do now?
    Which door should I walk through
    The clock ticks for me
     
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    Wandering through life
    keep seeing my own footprints
    could this road be right?

    Discovered new paths
    leaving bread crumbs on the way
    in case I don't stay
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I get hungary,
    I eat all the bread crumbs
    Still dreadfully lost.

    A leaf in the wind
    Floating aimlessly high
    Decisions amuck.
     
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    Figure 8 type path
    walks aimlessly in circles
    passing myself by

    If I do get lost
    as I drift on my new path
    well.........at least I tried
     
  8. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Resignation sets,
    Or will I let it go?
    Still confused and lost.

    What must I do now?
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What must she do now?
    Somebody, get an ink pen!
    She needs some help QUICK! :crying:
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I a regal man,
    Stand in some sort of vortex
    Sucked deep within deep dark
    Not familiar with myself
    I let myself go

    What must I do now?
    Black man, Black man; what are you?
     
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