Black Poetry : dose of her

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  1. insol33

    insol33 Member MEMBER

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    I love the way you take a taste of my mind
    Silky, smoky room
    Fills me, consumes
    That night you caught my look
    And got my attention with just a thought

    Now I’m hooked
    The silent kiss of your voice
    Whispering, the sweet little giggles
    I can almost feel your scent
    In my head

    Thoughts of you
    A night that could not last
    A day that could have gone forever
    The minute, when I just got to say hello
    Press rewind and play it all again

    I need it to get thru the day
    My fix… dripping like wet sex
    I can feel your touch in my thoughts
    The softness of your skin
    Like warm butter in my hands

    And you know you feel me too
    In your head like a warm bubble bath
    Soft, comforting, cinnamon and caramel
    Flowing like melody
    Spice for your soul

    Waiting, the moment slips by
    And the withdrawal starts again
    Uncontrolled craving, yearning, so **** open
    I need my next hit… cant sleep... tossing… turning
    Just for another dose of you
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hi: Inso133 ...and welcome aboard the ship
    Such a beautiful poem, that crawls very deep in the mental. I truely enjoyed the read, your pen works well.
    again, welcome here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe poet again welcome within , love the flava
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed through my mind like a gentle breeze. Beautiful write.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flowing likes the vibe thanks for sharing a part of you with us

    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang this is beautiful. The kinda piece I wanna re-read a few times. Wow.
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very cool smokey-room vibe. I like that setting and this poem was cool. Nice. :hearthis:
     
  8. freequeensee

    freequeensee Member MEMBER

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    dose of him

    wow as a woman it is something to hear a man describe his captivation ..... she must be someone special nice piece !
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW, this an excellent poem, "dose of her" .......VERY nice, I really enjoyed this piece
     
  10. SoothinDivinity

    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    Well, I just loved the way you wrote this one. Such a blessing to have those kind of feelings and the talent to convey them with such beautiful words. Much love.:)
     
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