Black Poetry : Dorian

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  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thought of you this morning
    And of colors of rainbow hue
    When my body reached your orbit
    And the pleasure splintered me in two

    I thought of you this morning
    And of being in your arms.
    Let’s praise the ancestors by losing
    Ourselves in passion along the way
    So on the day of fathers I say lets
    Celebrate the art of procreation pretending
    That repopulation depends solely on us
    I thought of you this morning
    And of being in your arms.
    Let’s lend thanks and praise the ancestors
    In our passionate chants along the way

    I thought of you this morning
    And of breathing irregular
    Of veined piston stabbing and
    When my climax evaded me
    And my bullet couldn't save me
    Couldn’t make me throb
    The way I needed it to so
    I thought of you this morning
    And have breathing irregular
    Of veined piston stabbing
    And then my climax overcame me

    I thought of you this morning
    And of colors of rainbow hue
    When my body reached your orbit
    And then pleasure splintered me in two
     
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    well, well i truly give this five stars. and a standing ovation. that my sis doing the [email protected] thing. flo on sis, flo on.:terrific: :terrific: :terrific:
     
  3. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww... shucks... i appreciate it nefarious.... lol... thanks for the love nickle... lmao....
     
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    Softly:

    You just actin bad on Father's Day. But if I tell you I got a Dorian too. Every woman should have one. Luvn' this flo. Flo on sista Softly.
    Much Luv
     
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    Girl I just read it again. You straight wrecked this piece. I can't say enough about it. Hell, got me wanting to call my Dorian.:)
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know this site is about togetherness but if you calling my Dorian... somebody is gonna get CUT!!! lmao...

    El Capitan! <motioning and making the Zorro sword swish> Tienes un problema meja?

    Dang I wish Zay was back on the site... me, you, and Nevar could give him hell! LOL... Thanx for the love Sis!!!
     
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    lolololololololol.....

    And I ain't mad at you for that. But just in case what's your Dorian's last name. (just kindding):)lololol

    Softly your very welcome.
    Much Luv
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow....i mean, what can I say...this was a brilliant work...real descriptive, real sexy...like the author...

    softly, no one can do it like you do.
     
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    i swear... i'ma hurt you if'n you know who's name comes out ya mouth again... lmao... 4ever... you crazy sis....

    abstract... my brother... to tell you the truth... nah... i ain't gonna tell you the truth... i'ma just leave it alone... or i'ma be just as freaky and fast and Nevar and 4Ever.... lol... anyhoo... you always show me love... one day.... i'ma make up for that... wink wink
     
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    I was really feeling this one cuz.. the imagery was sweet and the sexiness was just spicy
     
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