Black Poetry : DoOrs OF InSaNity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 21, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thumping on the concrete
    were 50,000 voices who's purpose was
    to expose the vile deeds of the masses
    (can u hear them coming?)

    i would wait at heavens door,
    for the greasy hands of muck-covered
    humanity to lift up there faces and bury their
    pride in the open soil waiting to be filled,
    to seek redemtion for once,
    (but noone did)

    maybe oneday they could finally see
    Jezebels watch ticking away
    at the hours set for Judgement Day,

    Dead soul in Sheol: i had the world in the palm of my hand,
    but it cut into my flesh and startd to kurupt my soul,
    killing me, killing me, and i can't be saved...

    Bystander on the brink of Eternity: but Man still can...
    where will they find Salvation? Loathsome demons trace
    their souls and pull them by strings into DoOrs what they call
    soul-hell-by-undone-mynds...


    Dead Soul and Bystander :I hope they become Completely done and on Gods Heart Again Like In Paradise...

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    open up my mental flow on i hear ya
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for feelin me rich,
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    You had these images lurking around ready to pounce, and we can feel this.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love watz...
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    yeah yeah ncie flow, I likes>.............
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks bro...
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    this was tyte...lil' sister...^5 :toast:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks angel, i appreciate it...
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