Black Poetry : Doors and Windows

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Jan 19, 2008.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is life a big house?
    That has multiple doors and windows.
    Which one to me looks out?
    Which door is the course?
    How do I get there?
    Outside,
    Where will I go?

    Each step is one more step
    Through that door
    Each step is one more step
    Toward that open window
    Why fears the air that sustain me?
    Or the path that’s set before me?

    I need to be patience.
    So many Doors
    So many Windows
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so many doors, so many windows
    lifes full of possibillities
    so many doors, so many windows
    what are the realities?
    so many doors
    so many windows
    let wisdom be your guide
    let love guide your heart
    let you conscience keep you alive...

    lovely poety bluewaters, go head and flow like you know!

    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the maze of life is an open window and a path to doors of options
    awesome write sis
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, life is filled with so many possiblities, so many decisions...which choice is the best one, and at which time? Thought provoking piece, very well posed.
     
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    Thank you so much
    yes life is fill with choices, we just have to do our best.
    Thank you for sharing your love on my thought

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Is it possible to live a day without having to make any decisions? If so, it should be a holiday! I agree with my Fam, all we can do is evaluate and do the best we can! Great illustration poetess!
     
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