Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dookie Tooth

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  1. flo-real

    flo-real Active Member MEMBER

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    yes you are fine as wine
    and stay decked out all the time
    from the top of your head to the sole of your feet
    but there is a problem baby....
    there is something in your teeth
    that I can smell through your cheeks
    and that bothers me
    I can't figure it out, but it's worse than a cavity
    wait.....I got it! it's something embedded in the roots.....
    It's a Dookie Tooth!

    The thing I don't understand is how all of your so-called friends
    titled you the man
    but behind your back saying
    Tyrone walk around thinkin he da truth!
    but...did you smell dat *****'s Dookie Tooth?

    So what you walk in da spot
    panties get hot...mouth's drop
    shows stop,
    but when you talk...smells like you been suckin on dookie pops

    Now don't get wrong
    I'm not talkin bout breath from the early morn
    or breath from smoking cigs or weed all day long,
    cause once you pop an altoid that smell is gone,

    But the kind you gotta stop and ask did you poot? ... and then suddenly remember naaww..that's the Dookie Tooth

    And why do all of your sentences have to start with the letter "H" "Hey" "How are you" "How was your day" and I wanna say I'd be fine if you stop breathing my way!

    Tellin folks "I don't know why she hatin
    cause if I give her some I got her"
    you may get me but you won't keep me
    cause yo breath! smells like hot dog water.

    Now I'm just tryna help a brutha out!
    but truthfully
    you need to get a colon cleanser for your mouth!

    poluttin da air like smog do!
    what you ask!.......the dookie tooth!

    Actin like you aint never heard of a bottle of scope
    what you need to do is run down to 7/11 and get a listerine big gulp

    See out kast was wrong for not tellin you that their song was really dedicated to you...
    cause yo breath smells like (singing) Boo Boowooohh!!

    So ladies if you get nausious cause he came behind your ear and whispered "Hey Boo call 911 cause you been attacked by the dookie tooth!
     
  2. miss-no-love

    miss-no-love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a very hillarious poem, very good and funny. Keep on doin ya thang



    When you look in the mirror you may not always see yaself
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    funny drop yet express a woman madness
    case of the ear drop
     
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    I am lovin your humorous flow!
     
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    :great: LOL This is seriously funny and poetically tight!
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I ain't been on this board in hella long, but the title got me attention and the piece went ahead and hooked me on in, that was funny as sh@%!! So keep bringin' it poet, this one had me rollin!!
     
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