Black Poetry : Dookie Tooth (Re-submitted because of errors)

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  1. flo-real

    flo-real Active Member MEMBER

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    yes you are fine as wine
    and stay decked out all the time
    from the top of your head to the sole of your feet
    but there is a problem baby....
    there is something in your teeth
    that I can smell through your cheeks
    and that bothers me
    I can't figure it out, but it's worse than a cavity
    wait.....I got it! it's something embedded in the roots.....
    It's a Dookie Tooth!

    The thing I don't understand is how all of your so-called friends
    titled you the man
    but behind your back saying
    Tyrone walk around thinkin he da truth!
    but...did you smell dat *****'s Dookie Tooth?

    So what you walk in da spot
    panties get hot...mouth's drop
    shows stop,
    but when you talk...smells like you been suckin on dookie pops

    Now don't get wrong
    I'm not talkin bout breath from the early morn
    or breath from smoking cigs or weed all day long,
    cause once you pop an altoid that smell is gone,

    But the kind you gotta stop and ask did you poot? ... and then suddenly remember naaww..that's the Dookie Tooth

    And why do all of your sentences have to start with the letter "H" "Hey" "How are you" "How was your day" and I wanna say I'd be fine if you stop breathing my way!

    Tellin folks "I don't know why she hatin
    cause if I give her some I got her"
    you may get me but you won't keep me
    cause yo breath! smells like hot dog water.

    Now I'm just tryna help a brutha out!
    but truthfully
    you need to get a colon cleanser for your mouth!

    poluttin da air like smog do!
    what you ask!.......the dookie tooth!

    See out kast was wrong for not tellin you that their song was really dedicated to you...
    cause yo breath smells like (singing) Boo Boowooohh!!

    So ladies if you get nausious cause he came behind your ear and whispered "Hey Boo call 911 cause you been attacked by the dookie tooth!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am rolling:laugh:
    oh this is so nice
    goodness
    keep the flow coming
    laughter is so healing:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol

    you know I was diggin it..lol :spin:
     
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    [email protected] pop....
    hahahahahahahahahahaha
    hahahahahahahahahahahaha
    hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

    thas the truth right there...
    this piece is classic...
    one love
    khasm
     
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