Black Poetry : DontFoWifMe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Amun-Ra, Mar 4, 2002.

  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 15, 2001
    Messages:
    1,868
    Likes Received:
    13
    Occupation:
    Sales Management
    Location:
    Dallas
    Ratings:
    +14
    Whoevertoldyou, to bring that stuff up in here?
    Kickbackcodeblue, I ain’t about showing fear.
    Whateverhappened, to you talking that trash?
    Itslipsildedaway, when your *** ran out of cash.
    Youmayhavecelebrated, done your dance too soon,
    Dumbfoundedmuthafo, mind be a Looney Tune.
    Don’tworryboutathing, because I be living large,
    bebustingyourbubble, cause I’m still the one in charge.


    :argue:
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 30, 2001
    Messages:
    1,440
    Likes Received:
    86
    Ratings:
    +86
    Say it!!!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    bust dat bubble Ra....... let one know who's in charge!
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 15, 2001
    Messages:
    1,868
    Likes Received:
    13
    Occupation:
    Sales Management
    Location:
    Dallas
    Ratings:
    +14
    Jess Tryin Sumfin New

    Thanks for stoppingpast--I know this ain't easy to read, but it flows much better in spoken word--Ra

    ;)
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 29, 2001
    Messages:
    2,922
    Likes Received:
    83
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Counselor
    Location:
    mid-atlantic
    Ratings:
    +85
    ain'tmanywhobedonespokedatanglishbettathanyasef, brotha Ra. :)

    loveded it!

    a
     
  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 15, 2001
    Messages:
    1,868
    Likes Received:
    13
    Occupation:
    Sales Management
    Location:
    Dallas
    Ratings:
    +14
    Trying to find . . .

    . . . the words that rumble together--that you can say all at one without forcing it--I ain't hit it yet, but this is my first try--I want them to all flow into one word that sounds like another--ain't there yet--but I'm trying--Ra

    ;)
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    1,264
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    artist
    Location:
    where the sugar is in the land
    Ratings:
    +9
    wellurdoinwellsofarmafriend. i'm lovin' it!
     
  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 15, 2001
    Messages:
    1,868
    Likes Received:
    13
    Occupation:
    Sales Management
    Location:
    Dallas
    Ratings:
    +14
    Thanks Y'all

    Y'all way too kind--Ra

    :)
     
  9. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 29, 2001
    Messages:
    3,141
    Likes Received:
    71
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    Chicago: Overlooking the Sea called Love
    Ratings:
    +86
    RA!!! You shall master this just as you have before...
     
  10. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 15, 2001
    Messages:
    1,868
    Likes Received:
    13
    Occupation:
    Sales Management
    Location:
    Dallas
    Ratings:
    +14
    Hope So

    Beginning to think I bit off more than I can chew--I'm still working on a second one and I ain't made NO progress!

    Ra

    :(