Black Poetry : ............DON'T

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Sep 9, 2005.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...dont let it linger
    dig deeper
    finger the past
    we all sleepers....
    even when we reach and we grasp....

    the meek crept while the weak slept
    zzzz'd on they a.ss....
    im awake now,
    u cant tell me this life gonna last...

    it seems God had to cleanse New Orleans from the wrath
    its so deep....
    still a another tragedy act.....

    its like ,a Bible re-enactment,
    can we see that??
    the end of days?maybe
    you know he works in mysterious ways...
    its crazy...

    searchin for answers in a political haze,
    my mind in a spiritual maze
    im tryin' ta ~LIVE FOR TODAY....

    my daughter only 3 years old,
    whut she know about the media's trend...?
    lookin at the TV like ,
    "Daddy turn off CNN..."

    the young need attention
    even tho we affected
    we need ta step in
    see the message
    c.ock back our mental weapons
    ease the tension
    and
    cease protection
    of our knowledge span.......

    they wanna ,
    break us in and
    shut down our knowledge man...

    fcuk the government supplements
    realize this is a problem man...

    pro~pa~gan'
    da's troublin us in this 'promise' land........

    throw ya hands up,
    start figurin out ya college plan.......

    life will go on ,
    after we weep for the dead...
    but dont let that stop ya from
    gettin deep in ya head...

    cause while the meek crept the weak slept,
    zzzzz'd on they a.ss....
    im awake now,
    u cant tell me this lifes gonna last........



    (im still workin on this,feedback appreciated...)
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey yo LURK man dis pack a punch like a heavyweight
    and leave da mind on bleep thinking i love the flava here
    words don't do this justice .........awesome write poet !!!
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    it's all part of the game man
    you broke this down a little to deep
    but those with the 3rd I can c

    peace my brethen

    DSS
     
  4. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice work Lurk! Keep it flowin! :eek:
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like what you're saying here poet, after all of this is said and done, we should keep uniting and talking to seek a solution....Instead of acting like it really didn't happen months from now. Keep flowing like you do poet.
     
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    I agree this is deep and profound Lurk. Very good write and drop here. I like how it speaks the truth and sheds not only light but hope and guidance. We don't want to be sheep caught :Zzz: :Zzz: :Zzz:
     
  7. Earftones

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    Nice flow, I could really feel the beat behind it and the passion. Keep it up
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love it!!! this did a punch and a kick flow it my brother....miss ya too

    Peace
    Angel
     
  9. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...thanx for the feedback..glad u feel me on this...spread the word...
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    nice way for me to reenter the get your flow on...
    important piece lurk...
    keep working on it til you think you got it right...
    it's right for me .. but trust them instincts..
    powerful...
     
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