Black Poetry : Don't You Want to Live Again?

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From the start I was livin' in sin
    Born again,
    Had a newfound friend
    In the end...
    Death would do me in
    Yet,
    Life had won!

    I had the nerve to
    Answer His call
    In a world
    That's a free for all
    Giving Caesar,
    His due in spades
    Life,
    Had begun

    Just as Jesus,
    Returned to us all
    A chance at life
    Next to God's throne
    Don't you want to live again
    Maybe?
    Let's just pray ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari
    aka 1poetsought copyright 2004
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Timely....and gripping
    as only you could convey...
    *applause*
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you haven't lived 'til
    you live through him.

    a delightful write.
    thank you. :)

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    I wanna live again!
    In eyesight of his throne!
    A thought provoking scribe!
    Well done poet! Well done!
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maybe... let's just pray.
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you have created an awareness odyssey....
    very nice trip into realization...
    this is hot 1poet... :hot:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yes
    This pose is top notch!!!!
    The message is so clear
    The way it was scribed was so appropiate
    Very nice poet!!!!

    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  8. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Poem.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Takes an element of courage to live again, even within the one, but we must take that leap, I like the style of this.
     
  10. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Praise The Lord!
     
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