Black Poetry : Don't You Know

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (directions for reading this poem...read each column down first...then read rows across.)



    Don’t you know.................................someone is dying
    Don’t you know.................................their love ones are crying
    who is to show..................................those that are denying
    who is to show..................................those that are never trying
    I wonder why....................................I’m striving to live
    I wonder why....................................I’m attempting to give
    who am I...........................................endeavoring to show my love
    who am I...........................................to the Almighty above
    can’t you see....................................we need to take the chance
    can’t you see....................................we need to take a stance
    love we need....................................to always strive,
    love we need....................................if we are to say we are alive
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa,



    ... Nice write poet, nice write with the creative flair.


    Peace In Bro. Nahshon,



     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the total creation of this was awesome
     
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    I appreciate your kind words $$RICH$$ & Clyde Coger...
     
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    yvw Nahshon, indeed.

     
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