Quiet Poetry Lounge : Don't Wanna Let Go

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sweet baby_face, Aug 5, 2003.

  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Regardless on how good u make me feel
    How hard u make me smile
    And how
    Right it seems
    I'm not yrs
    There is
    2 much going on 4 it 2b realistically
    Truly into something
    That can manifest into something
    In yr dreams
    It just can't happen
    Even if we could
    IMAGINE
    Cause it's hard
    So d**n hard
    2 let go
    Of something untitled
    With so much meaning
    And
    Invested time
    Cause
    U know like I know
    It was fun
    Fun while it lasted
    Cause I
    Don't want to say
    Good-bye because we'll see
    each
    other
    But let's close and old chapter
    AND
    Start a new one
    Adios,my man and
    Hello
    My friend
     
  2. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You said it all when you said:
    "So d**n hard
    2 let go
    Of something untitled
    With so much meaning
    And
    Invested time"

    You know why they don't title it, so they never have to end it. You can't end something that doesn't exist.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word......
    u displayed the emotions of a heart
     
  4. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks, y'all. Y'all making me feel all warm inside and stuff.
    Aww,shucks. Got my McDonalds' Happy Meal smile on. LOL.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome continue as u shine
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks 4 the love.
     
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    tight drop
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow poet did you read my mind been thinking of the right words to say to a similiar situation and your are crafted the perfect response. thanks
     
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