Black Poetry : Don't Touch!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by waynethomas, Apr 25, 2007.

  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    Conversation we're starting
    By sharing our feelings
    Feelings of pleasing
    With no complicating
    As you are still with him
    My best friend you're seeing
    What a lucky human being
    I do envy him.

    Dreams of me that you're kissing
    Lips you're arousing
    Tongue with you sharing
    My lip you try tearing
    Bringing pain you're entertaining
    With my barrier not breaking
    My eyes still fixating
    On how my lips make you move.

    But my feelings you're not caring
    As this is not prefect timing
    For my feeling to be declaring
    Cause he's still around saying
    He is in love with you.

    You say love he's not knowing
    Him saying
    Is not married with actions showing
    On that, you contemplate leaving
    Should I now make known my feelings for you…

    Or…

    Front as the friend
    Who's leisurely falling for you?
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Best to wait until she's truly ready to move on. I found this piece to be intriguing. Well written piece, poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let'em flow as da heart releases........tyte poetic scribe poet
     
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