Black Poetry : Dont Touch Me

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    But I have to say…
    Don’t touch me….
    Once you invaded my heart
    And shattered it apart….
    I had to pick up them pieces alone…
    For you never phone…..
    Re-live a dream that hurts to much
    To even start to write about
    Don’t touch me…..
    Don’t
    ……….. touch me
    Oh so gentle and patient
    The heart of the one who
    never
    ………never left your side
    Supported you on every move
    Believed in you…
    Wait don’t touch me…….
    For the cascading water falls
    And ivy swinging…a poetic thought
    My poem
    Your poem….
    Declaring of what….
    Glamorous illusions
    You took my breath and my soul….
    For I cant escape…. the vowels you lay
    Nor the verbs…engaged in your flow…
    Release me….Don’t touch me!

    Transparent and naked.
    I begin to see you for whom you are
    I see the shadows of your thoughts…
    As a smile crosses my face
    The depth of your soul shows
    Your invigorating strength…
    For I am your Princess
    My Prince
    Conversations
    Stimulation
    Imperfection we are…but the loves grows
    Wide and opens as the sea…for we are one
    wait……
    shhhhhh…..I hear you
    As the Angel song comes from your lips…
    Ahhhhhhhhhhhh….
    Touch me
    ……………Touch me
    Bath me in your sweet melody
    Caress my soul for you have invade my being
    Simmering in my heart and
    Enlighten of my mental….

    CLICK……turn down the lights
    Touch me
    Touch…………..
    ……………………me

    (C) 2004​
     
  2. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mzblk

    I felt all of that. Your love and your pain. It was flawless. :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    Good lawd, woman. If I were there I'd do a lot more than touch you. :D

    Nice...very nice. You had me fantasizing at work for a minute.

    :thanks: for sharing intimate parts of your life with us.

    :toast:
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ^ Monatary youre so crazy:lol:

    This was a tight flow msblk
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    Loved the verses and the changing of the tune. You played a master piece in this one..... Consider yoursefl touched... Ya know you are anyway..LOL :thanks:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl...
    you gon stop playing with me, the whole time I was reading this I was smiling because I just knew I was about to get several :court: :court: :court: :court: :court: ...and do some serious work on somebody's head, ...then you had to go and spoil it on the end, when you know how I being lurking in the background just waiting to tear some heads up :laugh: ...
    But never the less that was awesome the way you drove that home. nice work.
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    u mastered this to perfection
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What?! No you didn't. This is pure beauty and perfection, sis. Whoa!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    jazzymoonchild...glad ya likes i just try to do my best....thank you sis :spinstar:

    Monetary...smh sweetie can you say isSHOESsssssss????
    well at lease i know what sorta power i got wit ya....:wink:
    thanks for the love :heart:

    caramelpython....touchededed huh??? :blush: you show know how to pick up u girl dont ya....:lol: i am glad you likes your support is wonderful...thank you :heart:

    queentswana....smh :lol: sis put the hamma down...:lol: thanks for the love
    i know i can count on you and ya hamma...smh... :spinstar:

    SwtT..thanks... :spinstar:

    $$RICH$$....wow thank you...when i get a stamp like that from you i know it was a good scribe..thank you thank you for all the supportin love you have giving..... :heart:

    gempis...:lol: thank you and i guess i did from what i read in my replies
    thank you for all the support and love means alot.... :spinstar:


    thanks again
    Peace yall
    Angel
     
  10. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touchedededed...

    I heard that sister...sometimes a touch is just the thing we need so I felt what you were saying. Wonderful poem sis :)

    [email protected]....smh
     
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